Atercia

so yah. im doing a story so i want to challenge myself, and let my character grow. id like to see how i can work in cohesion with other rp writers here. as of now i need one person to tail me out of doran, as an assasination attempt (aimed for eyvra of course!) and the bodygaurd to, but thats way later. the story behind my assasin is up to you. all your desicions, actions, and anything as long as it fits, are accepted. let your character shine! mix it up a bit, ya know?

It seems to me that it's difficult to have an interactive storyline (RP, if you will) that goes anyplace without a main writer controlling an NPC (I know that's retarded, person controlling NPC, but it's the closest I can come to calling it). Are you planning on doing that, or just going wherever your assassin takes you?

I haven't actually posted yet, mostly because I'm hoping to get a good backstory for my main character down before I start RPing with him, but I could dream up an assassin to help ya out if you want

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First, I've moved your thread here to the right forum

Ross, you could always create two characters, one that would fit this thread and another for youself if you wished?

Eyvra, I've just looked at your thread and would suggest using more paragraphs and capital letters to make your thread more readable as that definately gets more people wanting to RP with you. One main rule is to start a new paragraph everytime a new character speaks so it is clear and easy to follow.

But there is a definite base for a good RP storyline and encourages to keep going with it. If you need any advice just ask here and I'll be happy to lend a hand

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I'd like to help you out, Evyra, but there are a few obstacles in the way.

First of all, the thread seems to be locked? I can't post in it, anyway.

Secondly, I don't see a character submission page in the introduction post, and all I have to go on is that Evyra's really big and he's got loads of tattoos. Could you say what he is (human, orc, ...?) and *edit* I'm retarded, question is moot. I'd still like to know where he is, though, and where he's going.

It'd probably also help a bit if, like Kastane said, you began a new paragraph every time someone talks (less confusing that way) - and typing it out in Word first helps you catch spelling mistakes, along with formatting.

Anyway, if the thread gets opened up again I plan on sending an Orc after you. Better watch out!

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Ross, the reason the thread is locked to you is because you need to create a character profile here and post it here: viewforum.php?f=23

Once we've approved a character, you will then be able to post in all the forums as you wish

PS I'm Katasaki, not Kastane

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>.> one of those "k" names

I was totally picturing ur sig in my head when I wrote it tho :p

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